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Not Salem 10-23-2014 09:34 AM

The Beastagor Of Hermes, a short poem by salem
 
My therapist has suggested I try writing poems to deal with recent tragedies

*ahem*

In the sea without lees
Standeth the Beastagor of Hermes
Eating his YT variable
And maketh himself yet full stable
When all his points be from him gone
He standeth still here as a stone
Here is now both green and yelllow
And all so the stone to quicken the load (ing)

thank you

Eslade 10-23-2014 09:37 AM

Made real progress today.

runlvlzero 10-23-2014 09:40 AM

I think your medical professional is just looking for evidence to institutionalize you on.

Mac Drettj 10-23-2014 10:32 AM

This seems like a higher lvl of sickness tbh

Andis 10-23-2014 10:41 AM

so elegant

beastagoog strikes again

Kergan 10-23-2014 10:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mac Drettj (Post 1654158)
This seems like a higher lvl of sickness tbh


heartbrand 10-23-2014 10:47 AM

gone and stone dont rhyme

Littlegyno 10.0 10-23-2014 10:47 AM

wud grade it as a D- in a beginning creative writing class.

Andis 10-23-2014 10:51 AM

that aint rite

let the man poet

sheesh

Mac Drettj 10-23-2014 10:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by heartbrand (Post 1654177)
gone and stone dont rhyme

Perhaps the author wants it to be pronounced like "goan"


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