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Old 12-18-2013, 02:40 PM
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Originally Posted by Zapatos [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]
At :08 there's a flash frame or two of something that pops up under "to twelve".

"So what if you had the chance" stays on the screen way longer than the text directly following it, which is to fast. I'd split the difference. The "so what if you had a chance" part also has a lack of motion to the rest of the video once it's on screen.. Maybe key it to shrink ever so slightly so it keeps the flow going.

Otherwise, smooth job.
Good advice, thank you. Staring at it 500 times over a day makes you miss important things like that.
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