Rate Hate or Appreciate (Help w/ Image)

[JerSar]

Please tell me what else to do with it. This has taken a long time (90% hand drawn w/ stylus) and I'm starting to think I could have just used a typeset because it doesn't look all that 'original'.

Thanks!

(It's a HUGE image, so click the link to view it on my server.)

http://www.tszm-wot.com/wp/wp-content/uploads/2013/imgs/Velious_Img.png

[JerSar]

44 views and no suggestions??

For shame.

[HeallunRumblebelly]

Makes me think of the Defiance logo. Not sure that's a good thing :p

[andromax]

Not too bad, I like the colors.

The ice fog is a bit over dominating and detracts from the lettering.

The perspective on the lettering is a bit off, I think that the focal point and the picture plane are not quite there yet. To achieve the focal point you have, the letters would need to be curving inward away from the viewer on the ends, but the they're flat.

In other words, the 3d look is too aggressive without respect to other elements of the 3d perspective.

I like the coloring and shading of the letters- I would consider adding more into the detail of the gray background.

[Vermicelli]

Less ice.

[Tecmos Deception]

I like the colors, but I don't feel as good about the blockiness of the letters.

[Autotune]

Makes me think of the Defiance logo. Not sure that's a good thing :p

[Nocsucow]

Makes me think of the Defiance logo. Not sure that's a good thing :p

good fucking show/game

[Swish]

You could have made ANY word... more subliminal "hurry up with Velious" threads incoming I'm sure :D

http://i.imgur.com/ptUCjk8.gif

[Joyelle]

Chisel Soft instead of Chisel Hard

[JerSar]

You could have made ANY word... more subliminal "hurry up with Velious" threads incoming I'm sure :D

http://i.imgur.com/ptUCjk8.gif

looool