08-02-2013, 05:34 PM
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Planar Protector
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 1,178
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Hailto
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Still too many commas; you're getting better though!
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I fixed that for you [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]
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