07-13-2014, 02:23 PM
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Fire Giant
Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Chicagoland
Posts: 831
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ravager
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Your story lacks subtlety. You can just have your characters announce how they feel. That makes me feel angry!
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