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Originally Posted by Valakut
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BDA was an illusion created by the GMs of the p99 server in order to distract the neckbeards who were poop socking day in and day out in order to provide a false sense of accomplishment even though they were engaged in one of the biggest failed experiments of their lifetime with no real climax ever being delivered.
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That's worth maybe a C-. It's rather short and very nearly intelligible, both heavy black marks for a run-on sentence, especially here in RnF. Try dumbing it down a bit, add another 30 - 50 words, pepper it with a few randomly placed tinfoil dog-whistles, finish with an animated trump gif, and you're golden.