07-26-2017, 02:50 AM
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Planar Protector
Join Date: Jun 2015
Location: Sullon Zek
Posts: 7,762
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Quote:
Originally Posted by kaev
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That's worth maybe a C-. It's rather short and very nearly intelligible, both heavy black marks for a run-on sentence, especially here in RnF. Try dumbing it down a bit, add another 30 - 50 words, pepper it with a few randomly placed tinfoil dog-whistles, finish with an animated trump gif, and you're golden.
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As a professional troll and licensed troll judge, I'll pass him-- but he is getting a big fat D.
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Kirban Manaburn / Speedd Haxx
PKer & Master Trainer and Terrorist of Sullon Zek
Kills: 1278, Deaths: 76, Killratio: 16.82
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