I found a few issues with this quest going through it. I rushed through the last part so I didn't pay attention to Bryan in HHP or the orc in SRo so you might want to see if they say the correct stuff.
-Sparkling Sapphire: You purchase this off of Noresa Sparkle in the commonlands. She charged ~264pp with 64 cha. It's supposed to be 450-500pp according to this guide:
http://everquest.allakhazam.com/db/quest.html?quest=472
Also I haven't went and looked, but her character model should be this:
http://eqbeastiary.allakhazam.com/search.html?id=3720
I think it was different, but haven't went back to double check.
-Toxdil in West FP doesn't respond to the correct text. Should respond to the text like that walkthrough says. Handin works great tho.
-Buber in the Commonlands tunnel doesn't respond to his text either. text per the alla walkthrough
-Lynada the Exiled in SolA is supposed to see through rogue's hide/sneak, but she doesn't. This per:
http://eqbeastiary.allakhazam.com/search.shtml?id=3249