It seems pretty good. For plot: u could maybe make the witch have an evil reason for making the food sports, like theres some ancient prophecy, and the witch is fattening up the ppl in the place so they dont fulfill the prophecy, and she wont get defeated. for characters, what about the main character is literally in love with chocolate, but hes the one who has to defeat the witch, so his friends help him out. Friends : a girl (she can be a swordsmen) who lost there parents to the witch. ever since tht, she has been attempting to kill the witch. she shows no emotion, and is pretty much badass, nd the strongest. A guy who got bullied when he was younger, and the bullies went next level and burnt his house, now his parents and himself are struggling to survive, becasue the fire happened recently, and they lost everything except themselves. the boy has emotional problems now and goes rage mode every now and then (he controls fire therefore he hates himself, but fire wont hurt him. he gained the power when the house was beening burnt) .
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