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Old 02-25-2015, 03:42 PM
Errakus Errakus is offline
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Originally Posted by RaefLaFrenz [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]
Haiku is not my first language, but I adjusted it for you sweet Prince.

Lets count.


I:1 dont: 2 like: 3 Tiggles: 5
Ground: 1 shakes: 2 as: 3 his: 4 cheeks: 5 jiggle: 7
Forever: 3 fat?: 4 Yes.: 5

close enough.

-LaFrenz
Looks like a proper haiku to me.