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Originally Posted by mastersapper
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I skimmed through it. Its cool. Sometimes it reads with a very cliche fantasy tone, but thats subjective...
I initially swiped through on my phone to see the length... a lot.
For some reason I felt some cringe seeing the length, content, and where its posted etc.
I had a friend once tell me, my best friends are online on xbox live. And this reminded me of the sad empathy I felt, and feel now looking at this.
Human connection and community is important, but idk just makes me sad to see it in this form?
I appreciate your enthusiasm. Seeing passionate people is exciting.
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I agree with this. ^^^
I think you should break it up a bit, not make it so lengthy.
I like to read stuff but the girth of the prose is intimidating and looks tiresome.