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Originally Posted by quido
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Hasbinbad, it doesn't really matter what Spectre said to you; the circumstances don't justify your use of a run-on sentence while conversing with him. If you wouldn't mind, please, I would appreciate it if you would refrain from their use in the future. I thank you.
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It's actually not a run-on sentance. I have inserted an exclamation phrase arbitrarily (there is no really 'correct' way to do this, I suppose having it be it's own sentance would have been more correct?) for speech-simulation-flow at the beginning of the first sentance, and the second sentance is missing one or two comma(s) depending on how you read what is there currently.
If you're going to grammar-gestapo
my posts, you'd better bring it and come correct, foo!