Nexii's Erotic Adventures: The Persistence of Hatred

[Irulan]

Originally Posted by Nexii [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Fier'dal? Eww...they're like tolerable as slaves. Which I guess is better than the other half of non-dark elf races (KOS)

It's been a bit since the last chapter. A lot going on but life is calming down.

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[Irulan]

Originally Posted by America [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

getting icier, very nice and continues a trajectory of improvement

Yeah. I speed read and it was a lot cleaner. Good flow.

Sorry everquest n dom are just not subjects I find super deeply immersive. So no detailed critique available.