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Hermionie Granger Repels the Fire Goblin Menace
'Twas a long journey to the peaks of Lavastorm Mountains. It was there that she spotted them - an encampment of foul goblin creatures, surely none other than Solusek Ro's minions infesting the mountainside. Luckily there are only two; a sinister wizard delving into the dark arts and a scout keeping lookout.
The scout spots her, and she fearlessly gestures in its direction. [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] Clearly angered by the wood elf's imputence, the goblin charges, hoping to catch her off guard. In one fell swing of her blade she fells the creature as a fire drake investigates the action overhead. [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] The goblin wizard hears the last tortured moan of its companion and flees the encampment. It doesn't get far - the elf moves upon it in an instant, the swing of her blade calling upon the flames of the land. [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] She says a short prayer for the tortured creatures, now forever returned to the dirt. May Tunare grant them more fortune in the afterlife. [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] | ||
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1. Hermionie Granger's name repels me from liking this story
2. I'm pretty sure that the goblins worship Nagafen, they aren't attached to sol ro faction and you never see fire goblins in Temple of Sol Ro 3. Imputence is not a word 4. you switched from past to present tense 5. keep trying | ||
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edit: double post
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Last edited by paulgiamatti; 10-20-2016 at 12:14 PM..
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You might be interested to know the goblins don't worship Nagafen. If you take a look round SolA you'll see they have Naggy raid plans scrawled on some of their walls. Unless they are 'kill your god' idiots like us PCs.
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"Solusek's Eye is the cavernous home of both the fire goblins and their allied clans, and the Solusek Mining Company, an intrepid group of gnomes here for the mineral wealth this area has to offer. Both live in an unsteady alliance with one another in the lava-filled caverns, united by the close presence of their enemies, the Solusek kobolds and Lord Nagafen himself."
IMO, the only Solusek related avowed NPCs in Sol A would be the efreeti and the elementals. Goblins (like kobolds) are just living there because they got no other place to be. I hope we get some more evidence that can prove this one way or another. Hope ur write a new story and improve the style paul | ||
Last edited by skarlorn; 10-20-2016 at 02:49 PM..
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I know I'm bad at roleplay fiction, I just wanted to make this post to see if anyone notices something. Also elf slaying goblins is cool, duh.
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do you think hermione granger ever said the n word? ):
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jesus fucking christ. This is what people do with TOV gear on blue if they arent raiding?
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