A short blue server poem by Swish - Page 2

Swish · #11 09-14-2015, 11:39 AM

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Originally Posted by B4EQWASCOOL [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Not a rant. Swish wanted to share his art with the blue server. Blue server was the inspiration and audience intended.

nice poem

Thank you, it's one of my better ones. If I come up with any others I'll be sure to add them.

Also thank you to those who didn't enjoy the poem or branched out and made their own version - that's what I love about poetry, it's open to interpretation. God bless freedom of expression.

maskedmelon · #12 09-14-2015, 12:50 PM

My eyes are both red
My server is blue

I long for my bed
It is half-past two

It's all in your head!
You've nothing to do!

That's what they said
But now it's past two!

I wish I were dead!
I can't even poo!

As I sit down to med
I begin to rue

That day I was led
Into this zoo

If only instead
Of waiting in queue

I might march on ahead
Straight through this slough

Of players wrong in the head
With nothing to do

Mayhap I should tread
A path all new

Oh, what was it said?
Other than blue,

In that one thread,
Of fun things to do?

Something about Red
A server you!

Jauna · #13 09-15-2015, 11:52 AM

Please come play with me
On Red
Because its the same twelve people

Jauna · #14 09-15-2015, 12:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Jauna [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Please come play with me
On Red
Because its the same twelve people

For some reason its not letting me edit my post. I messed up and thought haikus went 5>2>7

Please come play with me
On the containment server
No fun being alone