Keen Eyes Needed

[Argh]

Hey, nice job, and cool video. I liked the sliding text stuff.

My only thought was that the text seemed too opaque at times.

Also, I thought that it would be cool if you just stuck to the 4 cmyk colors (as opposed to the 4 + blended 3) +25% white intervals for shading (or 75% opacity on white bg) on all the colored fonts, as I thought this was what you were doing after seeing cyan on the first text. But, that's just a preference thing.

[Nuggie]

Coming from a slow reader: too fast.

But that's already been mentioned.

[JerSar]

Originally Posted by Argh [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Hey, nice job, and cool video. I liked the sliding text stuff.

My only thought was that the text seemed too opaque at times.

Also, I thought that it would be cool if you just stuck to the 4 cmyk colors (as opposed to the 4 + blended 3) +25% white intervals for shading (or 75% opacity on white bg) on all the colored fonts, as I thought this was what you were doing after seeing cyan on the first text. But, that's just a preference thing.

That's a really good idea. Thank you.

[JerSar]

Originally Posted by Nuggie [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Coming from a slow reader: too fast.

But that's already been mentioned.

[You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.] Yeah, I am extending the video about 4 seconds and adding in the excess into the larger/more clustered bits.

Thank you.

[Nuggie]

I like the way you handle criticisms. More people should be like you.

[withinyouwithoutyou]

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[Zade]

Not sure what exactly you want feedback on (the graphics or the message, etc) but at the end of the vid, i still had no idea what it was trying to sell me. sat there confused for a second, then rationalized it had to be gifting ink cartridges to people.

[JerSar]

Originally Posted by Zade [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

Not sure what exactly you want feedback on (the graphics or the message, etc) but at the end of the vid, i still had no idea what it was trying to sell me. sat there confused for a second, then rationalized it had to be gifting ink cartridges to people.

That's a good point. I was thinking a similar thing as I watched it for the 600th time - I think a key element is missing - "Purchase your ink with us and we give a percentage of your purchase to your charity" in more or less those words.

Thanks, now that that's in my mind I'll have to do a few things but it's a good point.

What did you think about the speed of the video? I'm slowing it down but only by around 4-5 seconds.

[JerSar]

Originally Posted by Nuggie [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

I like the way you handle criticisms. More people should be like you.

Thanks for the compliment. I work with graphics and clients so I think it's gotten me to a point where my work isn't completed unless I get some other people looking at it to provide me with different viewpoints - so I've stopped being so protective of anything I make.

[JerSar]

Originally Posted by withinyouwithoutyou [You must be logged in to view images. Log in or Register.]

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What's this? Dude looks pretty hungry, should go buy some ink so he can have more turkey.