my newest electronica lol

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sounds like absolute shit, the beginning sounds like a long broken echo more than a build up, when the 'beat drops' in the middle there is absolutely zero melody progression, it sounds like a loop with a slightly altered electronica note every 3 seconds, and the close makes my ears bleed, sounds like a super mario file that a rat shit on.

second version sounds alot better, need to have a longer stretch or a solo without those annoying electronic beeps interrupting constantly.